Top Gear – (Six Sentence Story #153)
Tis comfortable to be in cruise control,
But do take note of complacency creep.
Keep a keen look out for that darn pothole,
That’ll swallow you in a micro-sleep.
-o0o-
It is easy to miss all the danger signs;
That mid-lane hugger, the rear boot flasher,
Myriad red lights, and double white lines,
Those bums you’d call a fast-peddle-thrasher.
-o0o-
Such is the right time to shift down a gear,
(Or regret no action with much remorse.)
Power the motor, and prepare to veer,
Kickstarting the heart of the driving force.
-o0o-
Avoid the dangers; make a correction;
Nothing wrong with a change in direction.
(Sonnet)
This post is inspired by Denise’s Six Sentence Story – prompt GEAR. Click through with the links, if you, too, would like to join in …

Tis also Day 1 of National Poetry Writing Month …


I agree with every word! A great six.
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Clever and fun!
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Thank you Ceayr – this is only the second sonnet I have written … since school, (that’s a long time ago). I’ve been trying to use the form for the six sentence story but find I run out of ideas by the time I get to a Rispetto and/or Decima! But I made it this week! Yay! Appreciate your comment! 😁
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Thank you Keith – I appreciate your concurrence! 🤗
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Fun Six, Laura! and suddenly I miss my standard shift car of days gone by, lol. Mood poetry? 😉
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Thanks Denise – I had fun with this one … 😉
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no why didn’t they have something like this when I took Driver’s Ed?
..oh, yeah, it was fifty years ago…lol
Fun Six this week.
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Really well done, Laura! Sonnets are tricky but you pulled this off so well.
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No cruise control, fifth or sixth gear and no anti-locking breaks. Those were the days, huh?
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Seems like yesterday!
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I like the layout here, and the images of driving. “Nothing wrong with a change in direction.” Absolutely!
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Thank you, Ford.
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I like the complacency creep associated with cruise control. I like the line: “Kickstarting the heart of the driving force”.
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Very well done! Therre’s so much danger to avoid, and too many will not heed the fact.
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