Driving Home – (Tanka Tuesday#220)
For utmost impact
Make sure you’re exact,
Keep words both simple and clear.
To drive a point home
In full monochrome;
You need to be ‘quite’ austere.
-o0o-
A spelling mistake
Can cause a headache,
Grammatical ones are worse.
These are a decoy
From ‘the’ real McCoy;
Truly, a messenger’s curse.
-o0o-
Are points in the plot
Like … a … dot to dot,
Easy to follow and flow?
Do the words enthral
With an action call;
If so; you’re ready to go!
(Alouette)
This post is inspired by Denise’s Six Sentence Story – prompt HOME. Click through with the links, if you, too, would like to join in …

And … the Alouette by Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday Challenge POET’S CHOICE

Tis also Day 6 of National Poetry Writing Month …



very impactful
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Sage advice contained within a beautifully executed alouette. 🙂
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Love the melody and rhythm, and ‘Decoy’ paired with ‘Real McCoy’ 😎
Ford – (on hiatus at TVTA)
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Nice sounding meter and rhyme. I especially liked “Are points in the plot
Like … a … dot to dot,”
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Thank you, Frank, I have to confess to being quite pleased with the dots too.
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Ford, thank you! I’ve never tried an Alouette before. It just seemed to flow. Will check you out The Atomic Mage to see what you get up to in a different guise 🤪.
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Brilliant! 🤣 and thank you UP
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Thank you, Chris – Can you tell I loved penning this one? 😊
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😊😎
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Not only clever, quite true!
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A great SSS using the cue and a cleverly composed English lesson displayed therein.
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Love this Laura. Such good writing advice in a lovely poetic form!
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lol*
damn!**
* enjoyed from the first word
*compliment on the creativity and skill needed to bring such a delightful arrangement of words (and thoughts) into the world
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Thank you, Pat – the prompt seemed made for it! 😉
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Bless you Susan – enjoyed writing this one! 😊
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A labor of love makes for wonderful results. 🙂
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What a mash up! Three prompts and spot on advice; so much to consider, but, if and if- you’re ready to go! That was fun.
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Thank you so much, D. Glad you liked it.
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