Remembered – (Tanka Tuesday #232)
When saying goodbye
To loved ones
A sad tear drop falls
In a toast to all good times
Remembered
(Lune-Hirogatta)

Poem prompted by Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday Challenge #232. This week’s theme – Specific Form. Click through on the link if you, too, would like to join in. As per the challenge this is a Lune Hirogatta (Japanese for extended) 5,3,5, + 7,3

Touching, and I like the name of your new form. 🙂
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Thanks, Susan. From the heart and the love of Cathie McHarrie. ❤️
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LOVE the name! This is excellent, Laura! Great fun! ❤
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Loss can be a new beginning.
A nicely constructed brief form 🙂
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Beautiful poem and the name is nice!
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