Independence – Ovi Challenge #3
Find wisdom from a distant guise,
Step back, observe with open eyes.
Let a distant perspective rise –
When in strife and melancholy,
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An outsider’s lens helps embrace,
A broader scope, a grander place.
A shift in stance, or change of pace –
Helps unfold a bigger picture.
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The mentor’s eye can comprehend,
So take your own advice, my friend.
Extend the help you would commend –
In moments when your spirit’s tied.
(Ovi)

Ovi inspired by Ronovan’s weekly challenge #3 the prompt inspiration is Independence – please click though for the rules, if you too would like to join in the Ovi Poetry Challenge!

I have also linked to Di’s 6 Sentence Stories – the prompt this week is Melancholy. Again please click through if you’d like to participate in this brilliant community!


Nice lines: “The mentor’s eye can comprehend,
So take your own advice, my friend.”
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“An outsider’s lens” can certainly help open the view.
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I like all three 💜💜
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Thanks, Frank – like that you ‘got that’ 😊
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Indeed – I get frustrated that so many are closed to others view/opinion. I’m glad I’m not alone! 😊
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Thanks Willow! I’m loving the Ovi Challenge … 😇
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It’s a really interesting discipline isn’t it 💜 💜
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Detach in order to re-attach. Let’s keep the world gently spinning with a little kindness. 🧡💚🧡
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This is so profound
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Thank you, Ruby. 😊
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